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This one I said if it's going to treat my second verse as a bridge, im gonna go right to the bridge and spare my self the annoyance Then i realized I think I rushed to finish the story and didn't write a good closing. So I left it in the air which i kinda like. I think what's here works well https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14777707Haulin ass from Pittsburgh stormy night scene hydroplaning cargo out on highway 15 Gimme Three Steps playin on the radio never saw her comin but I saw them tires blow And I had dreams of bein hero to that damsel in distress voice on the short wave said she had a Gettysburg address [bridge] Ya see, I grew up in Gettysburg it was quite the coincidence population of 7,000 The Gods were makin sense yeah, I had dreams of bein hero to that damsel in distress wondered if I'd see her again at her Gettysburg address
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Great job man , i love this, If I had any faith on pitching songs anymore , that be good one for a Americana artist You could spend a few weeks on Spotify contacting artists and study music contracts , See if you could get them to cut it
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Yes that was great. Good ending too...sad. reflective...nice. Bill
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Thanks guys, still trying to figure out where I stand in this as an art form
Very least I know I'm the lyricist of these songs, but I'm also a singer songwriter.
A bit strange
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Fdem, in one of my previous song posts you wrote: "You just have to ask what part are you playing in the song? Seems like all that u can claim is the song." In that specific song I recorded everything myself. All I did was replace my vocals with AI vocals. AI was a tool I used to improve the quality of my recording. I like your song. It's good. But like you wrote here, you have to figure out what role you're playing. Without AI you would only have your lyrics. Your lines are very well-written but without the AI tool the song wouldn't exist. I agree with you that it's a tough question. I'm not sure where people draw the line between lyricist, composer, songwriter and singer songwriter these days.
Take care Robert
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Fdem, in one of my previous song posts you wrote: "You just have to ask what part are you playing in the song? Seems like all that u can claim is the song." In that specific song I recorded everything myself. All I did was replace my vocals with AI vocals. AI was a tool I used to improve the quality of my recording. I like your song. It's good. But like you wrote here, you have to figure out what role you're playing. Without AI you would only have your lyrics. Your lines are very well-written but without the AI tool the song wouldn't exist. I agree with you that it's a tough question. I'm not sure where people draw the line between lyricist, composer, songwriter and singer songwriter these days.
Take care Robert Lol. I know my role, I'm a singer songwriter. Im experimenting with this, and all I can do is enter my lyrics I only knew about it cause Mike z brought it to our attention I know one thing, if I wasn't a singer songwriter my results with this wouldn't be this good. I've heard some terrible [naughty word removed]. I'm capable of doing everything myself. Getting a radio ready recording may be a problem I don't know how long your going to keep trying to discredit me I'm not going to go into your thread and give you the fight you want. See ya
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